Thursday, April 26, 2012

Dialogue That Moves the Story Forward

I apologize, this probably makes no sense without the action/description, which I will add later.


K
No. Oh no…

M
K? What… what’s wrong?

K
Not now, not already…

M
But K, a child. Our child. You always said you wanted… K, be careful!

K
Pack your things. We’re leaving.

M
What’s wrong with you? You’ve never acted like this… never treated me this way. And what  are you saying about leaving? I only just found you again… K!

K
I told you to pack your things, now do it!

M
Tell me what’s going on!

K
Don’t question me. I’ll explain…I’ll explain later. Just do it, now, do you understand me?

K
It’s happened. Already… what time? Alright, alright. Are you sure? I have to… yes. Goodbye.

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