Blog 12- Scene Strengths and Weaknesses

After my peer review session, some stuff has come to light about my script. Everyone said I had strong dialogue, which I actually agree with. Some people commented that they liked my action notes as well. I think those are the main strengths of this part of my script. I especially like how I used Britishisms such as "snogging" which makes it seem more realistic that this scene is set in Britain.  The biggest weakness about this scene is probably that it is cliche. The eager man, the grumpy and reluctant woman. I would probably try to make the beginning of my script less cliche if I had the chance to write it again.